18 October, 2010

Haiku

Sodium-lit leaves-
Squishy pads on sidewalk pond's
October rainfall

3 comments:

CeeCee said...

The first time I read this I thought it said "Sodum-lit leaves". HAHAHA. oops.

Ross said...

Haha, well that would do a lot to change the meaning of the haiku!

CeeCee said...

Hahaha. I like "Sodium-lit leaves" a lot better!!!